The single most common marketing mistake founders make isn't choosing the wrong channel. It's writing copy that talks about their product instead of their customer's problem.
Here's the test: read your homepage headline. Is it about you or about them?
"The AI-powered project management platform with real-time collaboration" — about you.
"Your team stops missing deadlines" — about them.
The second one converts better. Always.
Your headline has one job: make the visitor read the next sentence.
That's it. Not explain your product. Not list features. Not win a design award.
The best headlines do one of three things:
Write 20 headline options before you pick one. The first three you write will be bad. The tenth might be usable. The twentieth might be great.
Features describe what your product does. Benefits describe what your customer gets.
| Feature | Benefit | |---------|---------| | AI-generated marketing plans | Stop wasting Sunday mornings guessing what to post | | 4-week playbook | Know exactly what to do every day for a month | | Channel recommendations | Stop posting into the void |
Every feature has a benefit hiding inside it. To find it, ask "so what?" until you get to something a human actually cares about.
"We have an AI chat feature." So what? "You can ask marketing questions anytime." So what? "You don't have to wait for an agency to get back to you." So what? "You can make decisions faster and ship more." There's the benefit.
This is the oldest copywriting framework for a reason. It works.
Problem: Name the exact situation your customer is in. Be specific. "You built a product but have no idea how to get anyone to use it."
Agitate: Make the problem feel real. Not dramatic, but honest. "You've tried posting on Twitter. You've made a LinkedIn account. You've read 12 articles that all contradict each other. Nothing is moving."
Solution: Introduce your product as the logical answer. "Quirre gives you a week-by-week marketing plan built for your specific product and stage. Not generic advice — a real plan with real tasks."
The agitation step is where most founders go soft. They don't want to feel like they're being negative. But if you don't articulate the pain, you can't credibly promise relief.
Read your copy out loud. If you stumble on a sentence, rewrite it. If you wouldn't say it in conversation, cut it.
Banned phrases:
Short sentences beat long ones. Concrete beats abstract. Specific beats general.
"Increase engagement" means nothing. "Get 3x more replies on cold emails" means something.
Can you describe who your product is for, what it does, and why it's different in three words each?
If you can't do this, your positioning isn't clear enough yet. Keep narrowing until it is.
Good copy in the wrong place doesn't convert. Put your strongest copy at the moment of decision:
The CTA button is especially underrated. "Get started" is weak. "Get your first marketing plan" is specific. "Start free — no credit card" removes the two biggest objections (what do I get, and what do I risk) in four words.
Quirre's copy generator can produce first drafts of headlines, hero copy, email subject lines, and ad copy based on your product details. Use these as starting points, not final answers.
The real value is speed: instead of staring at a blank page for two hours, you have five options in two minutes. Then you edit, test, and improve.
Good copy is never finished. It evolves as you learn more about your customers. Keep a swipe file of the lines that resonate. Watch where people drop off. Rewrite the weak spots.
The founders who ship the best copy aren't better writers. They're better listeners.
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